11/23/13

Digital Story Rough Draft

6 comments:

  1. Your digital story made me think about.....

    How great God is, and how he works in mysterious way!


    One thing you might think about changing is.....

    Maybe make the music a little quieter.

    The best thing about your digital story is....

    How you mentioned that God works in amazing ways. I have happy that the person is okay! Great Job!

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  2. Purpose: 6
    Dramatic Question: 1 I might have missed the question
    Emotion: 6
    Economy: 4.5 not boring, just not at least 3 minutes
    Images: 6
    Audio: 3 your music is sometimes louder than your voice
    Credits: 1
    Your digital story made me think about coincidences.
    The things you might think about changing is the music, after the emotions change from scary drunk driver to the experience found the cancer and saved his life, the scary music doesn’t really fit.
    The best thing about your digital story is how everyone was fine in the end.

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  3. An excellent story with a powerful message. Makes you think! I really didn't know it was going to end up where it started. Sometimes the music overpowered the narration, but it was still easy to follow. Great work.

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  4. Your story made me think about how easy it is to get distracted while driving. I also like how you revealed that God does truly work in amazing ways.
    I would consider changing the music. I had trouble understanding what you were saying.
    The best thing I feel is you made your story based on something most individuals experience once or twice in their life.

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  5. Your story made me think about how life can change in an instant.
    I agree with everyone about the music, although powerful it over took your voice.
    The best thing I feel is enjoy life for tomorrow may not be so good.

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  6. Your story made me think about how sometimes bad things can lead to good outcomes. Your music was a bit too dramatic for me. The best thing is that it is an interesting story worth repeating.

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